2017年1月12日雅思大作文--無私車日是好是壞

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On the vehicle-free day, private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned in the city centre while the public transport is permitted such as bicycles, buses and taxis. Do the benefits of the vehicle-free day outweigh the disadvantages?
無車日的好處很多,，包括讓大家愉快地度過安靜的一天，這是物質(zhì)層面,；讓大家意識到汽車的危害（環(huán)境,、能源、交通安全）,，這是心理和精神層面,；大家意識到這些危害后，未來盡量少開車出行,，社會就會因此安全得多,、安靜得多，這是社會的層面,。

當(dāng)然,，無車日也有問題。比如,，當(dāng)大家都不開車,，勢必引起公共交通的壓力激增，弄不好還會影響大家的正常工作和生活。因此,，我的觀點(diǎn)就是：支持無車日,，但是要提前告知公眾，讓公眾做好這一天的出行計(jì)劃,，以免造成共交堵塞,，影響公眾的生活。

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As you have got accustomed to the annoying noise produced by the cars running along the street, can you imagine a quiet day without cars? Actually this has already been practiced throughout the world. Last year, September 22 was set aside as the “vehicle-free day”, when people were encouraged to walk, ride the bicycle, or take public transportation such as the bus, the taxi and the metro rather than drive their own cars.

當(dāng)你已經(jīng)習(xí)慣大街上來來往往車輛發(fā)出的令人厭煩的吵鬧聲,，你能否想象沒有車的安靜一天,？事實(shí)上，這已經(jīng)在全球施行了,。去年的9月22日被定為“無車日”,，這一天鼓勵人們步行、騎自行車,，或者乘坐公共交通,，比如公共汽車、出租車和地鐵,，而不是開自己的車,。

(1) 本段為引入段。在本段提供了關(guān)于“無車日”的具體信息,，并引出話題,。很多同學(xué)不會寫第一段，經(jīng)常借鑒模板,，比如when it comes to the issue that...; with the development of...; there’s a heated discussion on... 這樣的開頭沒有特色,，沒有個性，很難打動考官,。第一段應(yīng)盡量拋棄模板,，用具體個性的語言對題目中的問題或者現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行描述。
(2) get accustomed to... 習(xí)慣于......
(3) annoying 令人厭煩的
(4) set aside （特別地）留出......

Personally, I believe this “vehicle-free day” can bring about a host of positive effects. At the most basic level, people can enjoy a quiet day. Without the cars hustling and roaring, the city will become a much more peaceful and cleaner place to live in, but to most city dwellers, this seems to be a dream that will never come true. What is more, on this special day, the awareness will dawn on people that they should no longer take for granted their life with cars. They will be made to understand that the benefits of driving cars do not come without prices. Cars, for example, emit greenhouse gas, produce huge noises, pollute the air and cause traffic congestion and even dangers that may threaten our lives. Once they realize thesehazards, they may minimize the use of their cars and then the condition of the city will be improved.

個人認(rèn)為,，“無車日”能帶來很多積極的效果。在最基礎(chǔ)的層面上,，人們可以享受寧靜的一天,。沒有汽車熙熙攘攘大呼小叫，城市會變得平靜得多,，也干凈得多,，但是對多數(shù)城市居民而言，這個似乎是一個永遠(yuǎn)也不能實(shí)現(xiàn)的夢想,。另外,，在這特別的一天，人們會產(chǎn)生一種意識，那就是他們不應(yīng)該把有車的生活視為理所當(dāng)然,。他們將會明白,，開車的好處是用代價換來的。比如,，汽車會釋放溫室氣體,、制造很大的噪音、污染空氣,、引起交通堵塞,，甚至威脅我們生命的危險。一旦他們意識到這些危害,，他們也許會盡量少地使用自己的汽車,，這樣城市的狀況就會得到改善。

（1）本段討論“無車日”的好處：物質(zhì)層面上,，人們可以過一天好日子,；精神層面上，人們會因此認(rèn)識到開車的害處,，然后就可能減少開車,，從而改善城市狀況。（2）bring about 帶來
（3）at the most basic level 在最基本的層面
（4）hustle 忙碌,，奔忙
（5）dawn on 讓某人明白
（6）take ...for granted 把......視為想當(dāng)然
（7）traffic congestion 交通堵塞
（8）hazard 危害
（9）minimize 最小化

Undoubtedly, the “vehicle-free day” may also cause problems. The most immediate one is that, when people do not drive their cars, the public transportation system may subject to tremendous pressure. If not planned carefully enough, this well-intentionedday may turn out a disaster to the city commuters. Fortunately, there do exist solutions to this problem. For instance, we can encourage people to ride bicycles or work at home whenever possible on this day.

毫無疑問,，“無車日”也可能引起問題。最直接的一個問題就是,，當(dāng)人們都不開車,，公共交通系統(tǒng)也許會面臨巨大壓力。如果沒有規(guī)劃仔細(xì),，這個好心好意設(shè)計(jì)的一天也許對城市上班族來說就會變成一場災(zāi)難,。幸運(yùn)的是，對這個問題的確有解決辦法,。比如,，我們可以鼓勵人們在這天盡量騎自行車，或者在家里工作,。

(1) 本段將“無車日”可能帶來的問題及其解決辦法,。
(2) undoubtedly 無疑問地
(3) subject to... （使）遭受
(4) well-intentioned 好意圖的

本文是沈陽雅思培訓(xùn)通途國際英語的Lorraine老師為同學(xué)們整理的，關(guān)于2017年1月12日雅思大作文--無私車日是好是壞,，希望這篇文章對備考雅思的同學(xué)能有所幫助,。