2017年8月19日雅思寫作考試回顧

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2017年8月19日雅思寫作考試回顧

A類小作文
圖表類型：	曲線圖
作文題目：	1994年到2010年，歐洲不同年齡階段的人每月去健身情況的對比 The table gives information about European people of different age groups who went to gym once a month or more .Describe and summary key points. 思路：相同趨勢可歸為一個段落中,，且相同趨勢對比,，掌握的詞匯如exceed，surpas等,，再用年初年末表達法,，掌握的詞匯如constitute，account for,，reach the peak at,，bottom out at等。句型可用before,，after等連接同一條線的兩個并列句,。結(jié)尾段概述總體趨勢走向，常用一句話結(jié)尾,，中間可用連詞whereas, while, whilst等連接,。
圖表：	待補充
A類大作文
作文題目：	In recent years, the pressure of students in university is increasing and they are pushed to work hard from a young age. Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?
題材類別：	觀點類
話題類別：	社會類
例文：	Working around the clock even after the exertions of a busy day at school, grabbing some sandwiches and then being buried in the piles of homework, these scenarios are somewhat slashed or even boycotted by some educationists, yet the irony is that we are inching towards this trend since in the long run, this“education gloom”will bring us sunshine. Apparently, students themselves are the beneficiaries. Industriousness and diligence is a merit which should be advocated, and this positive character is likely to beneficial to nurture other good qualities, such as making plans before every assignment and task, devotion to one thing and being calm under mounting pressure. This is especially important because students are in the habit formative period in their life and hard-working can help them to stay from the negative influence of some disruptive students along with their bad behavior. Another benefit of commitment in study is quite realistic and tangible--- a more promising future in the workplace and a strong chance to climb quicker in the career lattice. Harding working students are more likely to attain a better academic performance and they tend to be admitted by more prestigious university whose graduates are on the name lists of big companies which will give them a flying start in their career path. Of course, the exception always shows up if we judge this issue more objectively. Not every student should be shaped into those who are hard-working and can gain happiness in their study. Those with physical and aesthetic talent should be given free rein to unleash their potential in gyms and theaters, and those who are mentally fragile and feel hard to fit into the environment where there is daunting pressure should not be pushed to work harder. In conclusion, students are supposed to apply themselves in study as they can directly benefit from their exertion.