手把手教你6個步驟寫出真正的托福高分作文——看懂托福寫作題目是有多么的重要

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其實很多不擅長作文的同學(xué)們存在的問題都有驚人的類似點,，改幾個人的作文就能歸納出相同的突出問題：

1，審題不到位,，導(dǎo)致后面展開論述不貼和題目甚至跑題,。

2，第一段主題段不知道怎么展開,。

3,，為了追求高大上的句型錯誤連篇，尤其是第一段的開篇（強調(diào)第一段是因為一上來你就有語法錯誤,，根本藏不?。》謹?shù)自然低?。?br />
4,，不知道怎么展開1+3+1中的3段論述，不會舉例子??！

5,，論述不完整?。。,。ê車乐兀,。?br />
大家作文中幾乎都存在這幾個問題，但其中最重要的,，是破題?。?！

我個人認為,，同時很多托福雅思老師也認為，作文其實是最簡單最容易提高分數(shù)的一項,！因為這是應(yīng)試作文,！有固定的模式！,！絕對能夠短期提分數(shù)?。?br />
我現(xiàn)在以兩個題目，跟大家說一下獨立作文到底怎么寫,，其中最重要的是怎么破題?。?！

例文：Teacher should assign homework to students everyday?

1第一步：解構(gòu)題目
主語：Teacher . 動詞：assign homework 受方：students 方式（how）：everyday
拿到題目,，迅速在腦海中按照主語、動詞,、謂語和方式四個關(guān)鍵詞解構(gòu)題目,。本題一個should，暗含的意思是,，是否beneficial,，是否good。
Pt筆記：這就是為什么大部分含should的題目我們都稱之為“利弊題”,，因為這種題目都可以通過找利弊的方法來破題,。如果should do，就是因為有好處,；如果should not do,，就是因為有壞處。

破題關(guān)鍵詞的意思是：在下面的展開論述中,，每一個詞都不能落下?。。,。,。”热缟项},，你就不能落了everyday,。同時，不要自己發(fā)散關(guān)鍵詞的意思?。,。ū热纾灰裡veryday等同于too much??！因為題目中只是說每天布置作業(yè)，并不意味著每天的量都很大,。如果你想從everyday= too much來這個角度展開思路,，你要落在紙面上。不能默認?。?br />
這題有兩種角度可以切入,，從teacher的角度，比如，每天布置作業(yè)加大了老師的工作量,，老師過度疲勞,，所以不應(yīng)該；從students的角度,，每天做作業(yè)導(dǎo)致壓力過大,，過度疲勞，對學(xué)習(xí)失去興趣,，所以不應(yīng)該,。
所以，這個題目,，從切入點寫,，我們可以有三種方式，分別是：
1,，should not,。對老師非常不好。
2,，should not,。對學(xué)生非常不好。
3,，should not,。對學(xué)生和老師都不好。
選擇相反的should的切入點,，亦然,。

2第二步：選擇立場。
Agree or disagree,？
在最短的時間內(nèi),，在腦海中迅速的過一遍兩種觀點,，看哪一種更好寫,。如果你在選擇立場時不能立刻想出兩個可以展開的觀點，就立刻選擇相反的立場,。

更好寫的意思是：
1.能夠?qū)懗鋈齻€支持觀點,。
2.能夠?qū)懗隼印?br /> 比如，拿到這個題目,，我第一反應(yīng)就是,，應(yīng)該！??！第一反應(yīng)就是選擇對學(xué)生好。

3第三步：開始敲字。
1,，第一段寫法：
A.選擇好立場,，把題目改寫后直接敲在屏幕上。I agree that the teacher should assign homework to students every day.
可以改寫的方式：
I agree that teacher should assign homework to students daily.
I believe that assigning homework by teacher to students is of great benefits.
I hold that students can gain a lot by doing homework every day.
大家可以看出,，不管怎樣的主題句改寫,，四個已經(jīng)解構(gòu)的關(guān)鍵詞都不能舍棄！??！
開頭轉(zhuǎn)述的方法包括【同義轉(zhuǎn)換】【變換詞性】【變換表達】
【同義轉(zhuǎn)換】every day和daily是同義詞，意思和詞性都相同
【變換詞性】should, it is good和is of great benefits意思相同,，詞性不同

B.然后在前面加背景句子,。這里的背景句子，一定是你以前已經(jīng)背下來的萬能開頭句子了,，看大量滿分作文后,，總結(jié)出適合自己的萬能開頭句。一定要保證句子百分之一百正確?。,。￠_頭的錯誤會讓判卷人很反感,。

給大家舉幾個我背誦下來的萬能背景句：
1/ Nowadays, the Internet has vastly increased global interaction as well as our knowledge of societies around the world. Isolation is not possible for any nation-physically, economically, environmentally.
2/ Today's society is much more diverse, complex, pluralistic and swiftly changeable than ever before, making every social member a sailor driving on the sea under complex weather condition.
3/ The world's movie industry has witnessed unprecedented boom in recent years. Delighted by an ample supply of excellent material, people all around the world are thankful for the combined efforts by workers.
開頭并不是一篇文章的核心,，這里有自己的模式和套路OK，這也是形成個人行文風(fēng)格的一種,。

然后直接改寫關(guān)鍵詞就可以,。比如套用本題：
Today's society is much more diverse, complex and swiftly changeable than ever before, making every social member a sailor driving on the sea under complex weather condition. Thus, teachers are more likely to assign homework every day to prepare students better for the highly competitive society.
想得高分者必須換詞！

C. 在考試狀態(tài)下,，我敲完以上就進入下一步驟了,。
1. You should introduce opinions from both sides before introducing your own opinion. 做出選擇前，briefly state with "some people advocate that...while others believe...
2. You should further develop your topic sentence by introducing the benefits of your choice or the reason for your choice.觀點闡述完畢后,，要發(fā)展一下,，講講by doing this...或者that is because...然后再上案例上論證?！?br />
所以,，如果完成全文寫作后如果時間還剩余很多，可以把以上兩點加上,。比如此題：
Some people hold that doing homework every day lays a heavy burden on the studentswhile others believe it is pretty beneficial. In my opinion, I advocate that~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ because doing homework every day can help students to XXXXXXX(三個觀點簡寫羅列展開)
八股開頭有的人認為,，有的認為，我認為,。請一定要給出信號詞：我認為In my opinion, From my perspective之類的說法,！

4第四步：依次敲入分論點的段落主題句+結(jié)論,。
這樣先敲好的好處是——保證三段論結(jié)構(gòu)完整，不至于敲著敲著來不及了,。注意使用Firstly,，secondly，last but not least,；或者first of all,，moreover，in addition,，或者其他類型的,。必用！,！——Pt筆記：這些都是極其重要的邏輯linker,！

舉例：
寫法1：
Topic Sentence：同意。
Argument1: Doing homework everyday reinforces what have learned during class, thus doing good to students' performance.——理由主旨句1
Argument2: Doing homework everyday forces students to form the habit of dealing time wisely, which is of great importance for further career.——理由主旨句2
Argument3：Doing homework everyday reminds students of their main task, that is academic study.——理由主旨句3
Conclusion: Teachers' assigning homework everyday will benefit students in many respects, so I totally agree.——總結(jié)句

寫法2：
Topic Sentence：不同意,。
Argument1: Doing homework everyday forces students to be occupied by study tasks and takes too much spare time, thus harming well-rounded development of students.
Argument2: Doing homework everyday discourages students to study positively and actively and reduces their interest of self-study.
Argument3：Doing homework everyday harms the harmonious relationship between teachers and students.
Conclusion: Teachers' assigning homework everyday will undermine students in many respects, so I totally disagree.

基本上,，十分鐘過去后，屏幕上你就已經(jīng)打完我上面列出的這些東西+完整開頭了,。

5第五步：填充三個段落,，完整論述每一個觀點！
幾種方式,，牢記于心?。?br /> 1,，舉生活中的事例,，“每個人心中都有一個小明”
比如：每天做作業(yè)有利于加深記憶。Take my friend, Xiaoming as an example. His teacher used to assign homework every day and he benefited a lot from this. He used to be poor at memorizing all the equations and notions when learning Maths. One of the reasons lays that his previous math teacher had never assigned any homework after class, thus, he lacked practice. As we all know, practice makes perfect. However, his new teacher completely changed the way of assigning homework into a daily manner. By doing homework every day, Xiaoming made faster progress in learning Maths.
這種舉例,，只要一步一步完整論述完事實,，就成了~
身邊的例子最精彩！千萬不要覺得low,！平實的語言就很好,！

2, 利用諺語、名言和名人事例展開,。
一般格式是,，誰誰once said+名言+（他的）事例展開+你自己的總結(jié)。
而不是?。≈苯影衙哉f出來就完了??！
比如：臺上一分鐘臺下十年功,。如果你要用這個名言，那就這樣寫. As an old Chinese sayings goes, one minute's performance on the stage and ten years' practise off the stage. This means that If we want to achieve the best result, we have to do tremendous practice day by day. Thus, doing homework every day can help students acquire the knowledge firmly.
在利用名言的展開中,，以上三句話,，幾乎是缺一不可的，只能更多,，不能更少,！否則論述很難完整。注意連接詞的運用,，this means 和thus~~

3,，利用調(diào)查、研究展開,。
一般格式是,，有一個報紙，機構(gòu)或者什么做了個調(diào)查,，調(diào)查方式是,，調(diào)查人群是，結(jié)果是,，百分比是......所以,，表明了每天做作業(yè)很好。

6第六步：檢查,！
一般敲完文章,，還有3分鐘時間檢查。
平時練習(xí)一般能夠打到500到600字,，但實際考試只來得及寫400+,，因為會腦袋短路，展開就沒那么順利了,。但正好也有時間檢查,，快速瀏覽一遍，把小錯誤改掉~ 基本就結(jié)束了,。
任何人都不可能一次做到全對,，一定要留時間檢查啊,！

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